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Post by Ken Walsh on Apr 8, 2004 14:14:08 GMT -5
In America, Officer Hunter would more likely have said,
Can I see your drivERS license and registration, please?
and
Just drive safely if you don't want me to read you your rights (not practice* the Miranda Law (12) on you).
Remember to capitalize Officer as a title.
It was fun to read, although I imagine my brother and sister-in-law, both police detectives, would not be amused.
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Post by Andrzej on Apr 14, 2004 0:04:08 GMT -5
Hey, thanks. I guess I just wanted to introduce the name MIRANDA into the dialog. Make sure your brother and sister-in-law don't ever read that I've had enough of interaction. Got stopped in the 35 mph zone (it was like 45, then 100 ft later 35, and them 45 again). I didn't slow down, because I was kind of in a hurry carrying oxygen to an old lady. Ooops. Mistake. Now, $100 later (court costs) I just let old ladies die Will fix things here and there in the dialog. Keep checking. Thanks!
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